Audiobook Review – Better Off Without Him by Dee Ernst

Better Off Without Him by Dee Ernst Narrated by Gillian Vance

Romantic Comedy/chick lit/Older Heroine. Stands alone, but there is a sequel that is available.

If you like older heroines with kids, get ready to laugh!

Sometimes a narrator can ruin a book. Sometimes they make it better. In the case of Better off Without Him by Dee Ernst, I have to say the narrator made the story even better. In fact, this is a rare case that I can’t really separate the story from the narration because I just loved her so much. Did I love the way 45 year old Mona Berman was written? Yes. Or was it the narrator’s amazing acting skills? It was the combo, and I totally loved her.

Mona is a successful historical romance author. She has 3 teenage girls, and I love her attitude about them, she clearly loves them, but has no problem saying one of them is a bitch (because really, what teenage girl isn’t?) She has been married 20 years, happily, or so she thought. Until her husband came home one day and told her out of the blue that he was leaving her for a much younger, skinnier, blonde french girl named Dominique.

“Mr. Arnold,” I said between clenched teeth, “looking into a lighted make-up mirror with a plus-seven magnification is a humbling experience. Having your husband leave you for a younger woman just plain sucks.”

While it threw her for a loop, Mona’s pride seemed to take more of a hit than anything. Better Off Without Him leans a little more chick lit than romance, because most of the book is about Mona’s adventures in “practice dating” after 20 years off the market.

As a bestselling author, Mona is having a lot of trouble writing romance after what happened, so she decides to write a book about a 45 year old woman whose husband leaves her, and she discovers herself, and that she is better off without a man. Convincing her agent and publisher is a whole different story. So we have a story within a story.

The side characters were great too. Her gay assistant was fun (though a little cliché), her friends were were people I wanted to hang with, I even liked her girls. But the best was her crazy Aunt Lily, and the way the narrator voiced each of the characters made it even more fun. Because Mona lived in a historical house, she also had a plumber on call to fix the numerous problems. Ben was a total hottie, and I loved how Mona would drift away in her fantasies (or scenes from her books, as he was her muse) about him. The narration would change and sappy music would play during her fantasies.

Honestly, Mona’s inner thoughts were the best part. She was an honest, down to earth mom that said the truths many might think but won’t say so they don’t sound shallow or uncaring. She wasn’t either of those, she was just honest and normal. I got so carried away with laughing at this story, that I forgot to stop and clip highlights (I thought I had more than one though, because there were so many great lines!) and I wish I could re-find a few to share here. Just know that it’s real, and it’s funny.

Likes:

• Mona Berman is totally a friend I want to hang with.
• The narrator made a fun book amazing.
• Her inner voice was honest, sarcastic and hysterical.
• Beyond the first chapter, Mona never really felt sorry for herself.
• I laughed out loud a number of times.
• The heroine is an author, and her career is covered quite a bit.
• I liked the girls and Mona’s snarky attitude towards them.
• Great side characters, especially her aunt and the gay couple.

Dislikes:

• I honestly didn’t even realize it till a friend mentioned it, but there were no good sex scenes. They were fade to black. It was still sexy, and sex was talked about with no problems.
• I am so disappointed that the follow up book is not available on audible. I don’t think I want to read it after listening to and loving the first. (This stands alone though).

The Down & Dirty:

Rating: 5 Stars (May have been 4.5 but the narration brought it up), 2.75 Heat (sexy but mostly fade to black), 5 Narration

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I don’t see book 2 on audible 🙁